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Did You Like Rouge Chapter One?
I Loved It
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It Could Be Better
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Hey Wasn't the one before this one the same as two before this?
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PostSubject: Chapter One   Wed Jul 30, 2008 4:25 pm

Alrighty here it is! Rouge Chapter One:: Introductions

Description: No bullet, no suspect, just one dead Phillip Callings. Command has sent Joe Jennings and Tony Red on an assignment to discover the one thing elusive to this mystery. Truth. Now with everything changing and lies brought out what will be the outcome of the mission Joe and Tony were sent on. Will they discover the murderer or will they fall into a trap laid out by the Rouge.

(Copyright 2008 Sergeant Films)
Rouge Chapter One:: Introductions was created under Microsoft’s “Game Content Usage Rules” using assets from Halo 3, © Microsoft Corporation.

Halo 3 copyright of Bungie and Microsoft

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Notes: The differences between the Youtube and Machinima videos are the quality. The Machinima.com one is in a letter box while the one on youtube.com is widescreen


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PostSubject: Re: Chapter One   Mon Sep 01, 2008 12:18 am

This is a really good series, I haven't seen any plot like this before. Well done.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter One   Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:39 pm

thanks a ton! that's one of the many htings we go for!

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter One   Fri Feb 20, 2009 12:28 am

Honestly; could have been better.

There are only three things wrong with this series, so I hope you'll forgive me if it seems like I'm ripping on it.


* The voices are very similar. Nobody's fault there, but unless I'm really paying attention, I can't tell who's talking.

* The writing. I'm not saying it's bad, but the pacing makes it hard to follow after the first episode. I've watched the series a few times to make sure I got the general idea, but the stories speeds up so fast.. You could have probably stretched the story out to a dozen or so episodes easily with the story you had. If you ever want help in this aspect, I'd be glad to demonstrate that I can do more than complain :p

* The characters. I'm not sure who's who, again I blame the pacing, because you want to jump right in. I get it. It's just.. Hard to keep up with. I hear the names, but by the time I've heard that, the camera has jumped between three people. It's one of the rare times I wish everyone had a name displayed above their heads.


That being said; the music selection was awesome, the camera work was pretty good, and the concept was great. What was the song for chapter ones intro? When they are driving around?
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter One   Fri Feb 20, 2009 12:18 pm

I understand your complaints perfectly, if I could change anything I would change the pacing, but we had decided on four chapters so that we could move on to actually creating a 16 episode plus series. Rogue for us was mainly practice and I'm glad that you have critiqued and given your opinion. Anyways, I hope you stick around to see how we can improve!

Oh and the song is Follow by Incubus. It is on the Halo 2 OST most other songs are made bby Bill Brown but UMC has started taking videos off YouTUbe with his music...so Chapter Four is the only chapter with Royalty free and original music!

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter One   Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:26 pm

Awesome. Another question; Doctor Daniel's boss.. Is he a Medic also? If not, what was his rank?
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter One   Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:40 pm

Yes he is a medic also, but yes, quite a good thing you called him "Doctor Daniel" matt would appreciate that Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter One   Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:56 pm

Naturally.

Also, the reason I asked is because I'm making a little surprise for you all.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter One   Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:05 pm

heck well I love surprises!

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