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PostSubject: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeThu Mar 27, 2008 10:53 am

Undercover

-Undercover is a comedy, thats new to Sergeant Films. Written by myself, though atm, i do not have every epidoses made.
-Production will not be started for a while
-It is all about the worst spys ever. They are put on important, and not important missions. Further details cannot be posted because we dont have enough of the story written yet to have to big of an idea where the plot is going.
-If you are interested in acting in this movie, send me a voice clip of yourself. My eamail is red_southy@hotmail.com
-If you have a good video capture card, please say that aswell.



Undercover
Written by:: Matt Southall
Directed by::Matt Southall
Produced by::Chadwick and Sergent Films

KEEP IN MIND THAT THIS IS ROUGH COPY. There is millions of spelling mistakes and such and this is only the first episode's script. If you have any ideas on where this could go or more characters we could introduce, reply below.


Zooms in on someone from far away, music starts playing 'Disturbed-then thousand fists in the air'
make enough shots to fit until lyrics come up, and then show him sitting, and zoom close to face, then show him from far away,a nd the music is more quite, showing he is listening to it and its not the opening music.
Sergent Kimball-*over headste* what are you doing, i need your recon
Preach- fuck, FINE. BAD WORD
*meanwhile music is fairly quite in background
Music pumps backup and it zooms away from him as he walks away and goes to title
Shows Preach close up on face running, in slow motion, narration starts
*Today was one of the hardest mssion i have ever completed, we needed full stealth. I was too meat up with another correspondant at 0 600. We were then to investigate and take a disk from the enemy. It was the kind of mission that makes you wish you didnt become a UNSC undercover spy, but a burgerfliper like you dad always wanted. I know they make the big bucks, but unfortunatly, i suffer from burgur greese phobia. the fear of cows. i cant beeing near those pattys, anyways, back to the mission
Preach rounds corner, and see's his correspondant.
Preach - Waaaazzzzaaaap!
Floyd - Waaaazzzzzaaap!
Preach - So wheres the cd?
Floyd - from my observations, in that computer...
Preach- alright, lets go get it.. *cutt of by floyd telling him to 'shh'
Floyd - Shhh, someones coming! hide
*both of them are in a corner, so they are already crouched, they just turn around to face the corner
Guard walks in and looks around room suspisciously
Shows point of view of him looking in theater, just look around like you his eyes, and then he doesnt see anything, even thought they are really obvious.
guard turns and proceds on typing on the computer. Typing sound needed.
Floyd and Preach turn around to face each other again
Floyd - *wispers* What the hell do we do?
Preach - here, ill sneack up behind him
Floyd - then what
Preach - uhh, i dotn fucking know! thats your job as assistant assface!
Floyd - That makes no scence
Preach - That's what see said
*preach crouch walks towards guard, dramatic music, he knocks something off a table, it falls with a crash, sound effect needed.
*camera looks at guard. Guard continues typing
Preach - looks back at floyd
Floyd - *crouched in corner facing wall
Preach - *Whispers to himself slowly - Shhhit
Preach continues walking up to guard, and stands, inching closer, and stubs his toe
Preach- Fuuuuuucccccckkkkk
Preach *gasp
Floyd - *gasp
Preach - are we dead yet?
Floyd - no dude... i think he's.. deaf
Preach - Yeeeessssssss def guard! freakin sweet.
Floyd - well...
Preach - well what...
Floyd - Are you going to try it out?
Preach - try what out?
Floyd - ok here watch... Hello? *speacks to guard
*instantly both Preach and Floyd drop to the ground, Camera watching them drop from front of guard, each on either side of the guars neck from behind, and drop out of site behind the guard.
Preach and floyd look up at guard then each other
Preach - Sweeeet!
both start melee whacking and making loads of noise and laughing behind the guard, who continues tytping, only to stop and watch the guard... all you hear is the typing sound
Preach - Alright, alright, lets get the cd and get the fuck out of here
Floyd - Did they say kill him in your instructions? *pulls out sniper rifle and lays it a milimeter from the back of his head
Preach - i dont thi..
*sniper rifle shot and the guard drops to the ground
Floyd - 8calmly - ok, grab the cd, and lets go
Preach - *out of control - HOLY SHIT DUDE! what did you do that for! We are goign to be sooo screwed
Floyd - You think?
Preach - Hell ya!
Floyd - Monkey Fuck! alright, ill call in for reinforcements, you grab the cd, and go find some transport out of here
Preach - Got it! *grabs cd and runs out door
*camera folows preach running out door and you hear vaigly Floyd
Floyd-yes, EVERYONE!, send them all, we have be comprimis.... *fades out because preach gets to far away
*shows preach run up to a warthog
Preach- Good enough
*jumps in and drives it up to the door
preach - *yells to floyd - GET IN!
Floyd - Coming!
*floys runs acrost the top of the hog and slides in, kind of liek dukes of hazard.
Floyd and Preach - YEEEHAAWWWW!!!
*camera shows back tire from ground point of view burnout and drive out of site
__________________________
Camera views spartans dropping from air and hittign the ground, patroling and combign the ground lookign for enemys *rock music playign in background
ODST Spartan1 - Where the hell is the enemy...
Floyd and preach interupt screaming and skid right by all of the odst and out the front gate
__________________________
*awards ceremony
Sergeant Kimball - Boys, you risked your lives today. You fought corageously and with hounor. You brought back the data cd, and eliminated all the enemys from the deaf military
Preach and Floyd - *look at each other - Yeaayaaa
Sergeant Kimball - Now wake your ass up
Preach - What?
Everything becomes fizzy, you hear sergent now talkign echoie
Sergeant Kimbal - Wake your ass up Private First Class Preach
Preach - *shows him lying on ground - fuckkkkkk
______music plays, and goes out to credits
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeMon Sep 01, 2008 12:26 am

This would be a kick ass series, very funny script.
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeMon Sep 01, 2008 1:05 pm

That's what we're going for!
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeMon Sep 01, 2008 1:14 pm

Good to know.
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeWed Sep 03, 2008 9:12 pm

I'm sure Matt (southy) would be pleased to hear that!
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeWed Sep 03, 2008 9:14 pm

I guess that my name kind of screws up the flow of the site for you two.
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeWed Sep 03, 2008 9:17 pm

nope cause I'll call you........ MB....wait know....that won't work....Beasly...almost like Beastly
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeWed Sep 03, 2008 10:19 pm

Well that works, 'cause thats what my friends call me.
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeWed Sep 03, 2008 11:24 pm

well look at that!
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeMon Sep 08, 2008 2:36 pm

Looks pretty good to me pirat
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeTue Sep 09, 2008 11:55 am

*off topic*

O Rly?
Yah Rly
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeTue Sep 09, 2008 12:56 pm

No Wai!
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeTue Sep 09, 2008 12:59 pm

lol

*on Topic*

I can't wait for this series!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeFri Sep 12, 2008 11:37 am

and chad, the forum and blog work at school so i can still keep in contact which is a plus. who knows though, it may get blocked but i don tthink it should. its educational and used for creatign movies
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeFri Sep 12, 2008 12:07 pm

well thats good.
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeFri Sep 12, 2008 3:03 pm

AS SOON as i posted that, bam blocked lol. but the blog is working
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeFri Sep 12, 2008 6:18 pm

lol
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeFri Sep 12, 2008 10:17 pm

go figure Rolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeFri Sep 12, 2008 10:17 pm

i know eh
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeSat Dec 27, 2008 2:52 am

This is going to be great!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeSat Dec 27, 2008 8:21 pm

that's what we are hoping for Wink hey look! the first on this forum in ages that wasn't spam!!!!!!!!!!!@!! holy freakin crap we're awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeSun Dec 28, 2008 7:35 pm

SPAM!!! no, but seriously, what are you talking about? I think I missed something...
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeSun Dec 28, 2008 9:17 pm

lol face, you missed out on some stuff havent you?
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PostSubject: Re: Story/Background   Story/Background Icon_minitimeSun Dec 28, 2008 9:35 pm

yeah...
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